托福作文考試*28分如何得？一起看看在線為大家?guī)淼耐懈Ｗ魑目荚?28分經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享吧，祝大家考出好*！

　　復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)間：復(fù)習(xí)了差不多20天。覺得時(shí)間很緊。所以剛接觸托福，不著急考的同學(xué)還是把復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)間留足一點(diǎn)。逼自己一把是必須的，不過別過頭了，勞逸結(jié)合。

　　托福作文： 其實(shí)重點(diǎn)要說的就是托福作文，尤其是第一篇。第一篇作文的聽力有三個(gè)反駁的點(diǎn)，第三個(gè)點(diǎn)真太沒聽明白……考完試覺得肯定第*個(gè)作文完蛋了。可是ETS還是給的good。為什么呢??? 模板啊親!!!!!!!!!! 別的不說了，分享了先!大家自己體會(huì)!(模板中有個(gè)也是從論壇里面分享到的，很有用滴!在此鳴謝那位好心分享的同學(xué)!)

　　五段哦~~不過考試的時(shí)候要是時(shí)間來不及，就將就四段也行，最后一段就不用寫了。

　　第一篇，說一下reading的main idea，并說出reading和listening之間的關(guān)系(一般都是相反的觀點(diǎn))：version1 ：The reading passage is concerned with the issue of ... The professor's lecture deals with the same issue. However, he thinks that.... Which contradicts what the reading states. Also, he gives several main reasons to cast doubt on each of the author's ideas. / version2 ：The reading passage presents some serious disadvantages of wind power as an alternative source of energy. The professor, however, disputes these arguments. Also, he gives several main reasons to cast doubt on each of the reading's ideas.

　　第二段，先說reading，再說listening： First of all, even though the reading passage suggests that...., the professor argues in the lecture that... This is because..., which means..... Apparently, the professor's argument disproves its counterparts in the reading.

　　第三段，先說reading，再說listening： Secondly, the reading passage also asserts that..... The professor refutes this point as well, pointing out ....

　　第四段，為了讓文章段落顯得不那么死板，體現(xiàn)多樣性，就先說listening， 再說reading： In addition, the professor indicates that .... Whereas the author of the reading claims that.... The professor proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that......

　　結(jié)尾： In conclusion, the professor clearly identifies the weakness in the reading passage and convincingly shows that the central argument in the reading is incorrect.

　　第二個(gè)作文也按五段來寫，第一篇: 明確表明你的立場(chǎng)。 第二段：第*個(gè)reason+detail+example 第三段：第二個(gè)reason+detail+example 第四段：第三個(gè)reason+detail+example 第五段：結(jié)尾，再次表明立場(chǎng)。

　　一般在30分鐘內(nèi)，對(duì)大多數(shù)人來說能說明白自己觀點(diǎn)的小文章，字?jǐn)?shù)大概500左右。 寫差不多500字就是最理想的狀態(tài)了，別超過550。要是您是大牛的話，想寫多少寫多少吧~~~

　　中間三段不要弄得一段太肥，另外兩個(gè)營(yíng)養(yǎng)不良。最好肥瘦差不多，要么就拿個(gè)兩段的肥瘦差不多，另外一段稍微少點(diǎn)也行。

　　至于為什么會(huì)有reason+detail+example 的模式呢?請(qǐng)參照托福作文考題的題目要求……

　　Reason哪里來呢? 1. 平時(shí)練作文的時(shí)候，看到作文題目，一定要自己先想至少三個(gè)reason。實(shí)在想不出來了再去看看范文的reason是什么。

　　2. 平時(shí)生活里面多注意積累。要是想不出來，問問身邊的朋友，也許別人的一句話就能讓你茅塞頓開。

　　Detail呢?----detail就是對(duì)reason的說明。2-4句話. 不要太長(zhǎng)，也不能太短。看你的寫作速度和打字速度，所以自己拿捏啦。

　　Example?---Example最好每段都有，至少要出現(xiàn)在兩個(gè)段落中。就是至少你要有兩個(gè)例子!!既可以是別人的experience也可以是你自己的。或者你編也行。

　　光說不練不行，現(xiàn)在來看看這篇文章。

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The friend that you can have fun with is more important than friend that you can get help with. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

　　第一篇開頭，表明觀點(diǎn)：Friends make our life interesting and wonderful. Life would be pretty lonely without them around. Friends are not just for socializing and having fun. Most importantly, they are always there for you when you need help. Personally, I value the friends that I can get help from more than the friends that I can have fun with. (第一篇，閱卷人找的就是這句話。)

　　第二段，reason+detail+example： To begin with, friends will come and go in our life; having helpful friends means having people I can count on when I had bitterness and disappointment in my life.(理由1)They are there to listen to me and give me help and advice. It is hard to imagine what would happen without their kindness help.(detail1)For example, (開始舉例)six months ago me and my husband of almost 2 years ended our marriage because of his betray. It was so miserable and I tired to commit a suicide in the bathroom. But my friends found me finally and took me to the hospital. They looked after me and kept comforting me and cheer me up. Now, I have already fully recovered from it. I feel very appreciate for their help and realize that having friends who is willing to help is really important, because when you feel like it is the end of the world, and have no one to go to, your friend will always be there for you.(呼應(yīng)一下這段的首句，提醒閱卷老師你的例子沒有跑偏)

　　第二段，Reason+detail，這段沒寫example，但是在detail里面加了一個(gè)對(duì)比： In addition, helpful friends let you know what the true friendship is, how to be friendly to other people, and how to solve our daily problems, etc.(理由2) People always say that tell me who your friends are and I'll tell you who you are. Thus, it is of utmost importance to carefully choose your friends, for they will have great influence on our life. Surround yourself with helpful friends who are models of something instead of experts of nothing, for they are capable of contributing to a solution of your problem from their own experiences. On the contrary, if you surround yourself with lots of friends that you could only have fun with, you can barely learn useful things from them.

　　第四段，回到Reason+detail+example： Finally, a helpful friend could also bring us lots of happy time and make our life beautiful.(理由3)Life without them is just like flowers without sunshine.(detail)For example, a helpful friend is generally able to work out a wonderful plan for traveling or doing other interesting things. Most of my friends and I are keen on traveling and we went to Korea last year. It was really fun to stay with them; they arranged almost everything from hotel to cars. We went to lots to tourist sites and tried different kinds of delicious Korean food. I never remain suspicious that I can have fun with them as well.(呼應(yīng)理由3，順便提醒老師，例子沒寫偏)

　　第五段 再次表態(tài)： To sum up, the factors that have been discussed above lead me to believe that the friend that you can get help from is more important than the friend that you can have fun with. As an old saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.

　　這一篇差不多500字。表明了立場(chǎng)，說了三個(gè)理由，舉了兩個(gè)例子，detail也有。照這個(gè)模式在考場(chǎng)里面寫，錯(cuò)不了。托福作文要得高分就一定要。必須要。非常要。好~好~練~習(xí)~啊!